Hasil penyuntingan Story line klompok 8

 Hello, assalamualaikum, I'm Doni Darmawan, here I will share the edited storyline that was made by another group, to fulfill the UAS English conversation assignment.

This is a storyline from a previous project but I found some mistakes in the storyline made by another group, therefore the group and I edited it into a good storyline and used the editing symbols that were given

The pictures above are some of the errors in the storyline, and I will provide the correct edits